Logo pour investisseur immobilier - Match Maker de projet !

krisi

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  1. krisi dit

     Hello,
     
     here two versions of the logo : white and color.
     Let me know if you need something else.
     
     Regards,
     Krisi

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  1. krisi dit

     Hello,
     
     here last adjustments.
     Let me know what do you think about two versions with logo next to the name and logo above the name.
     
     Regards,
     Krisi

  2. BFI dit :

     Hello krisi,
     
     Sorry for the delay. The logo looks really good now !
     
     For the colored version, here is what i've just made : seaflats.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/12/Okimo colors.jpg
     
     As you can see, the colors are much more discrete and only by small touch. Here are the colors code :
     
     For yellow : #c7b30b
     For purple : #4a0771
     For green : #0d6c64
     For dark blue (the key) : #08446d
     For light blue : #1776b8
     
     The best is that you update the logo with these colors, and then, as it's requested in the brief, to send us an editable file with all the layers in psd and ai.
     
     Once you'll do the color version for horizontal and vertical version, with the white version here attached and added, it will be perfect. The contest ends tomorrow.
     
     Oh and by the way, we have just noticed it was you that realized our other logo, the one for our holiday rental "Seaflats" ! It's great to see that it's you once again that grab our attention !
     
     Have a good end of week.

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  1. krisi dit

     Hello,
     
     I work on the font and I make it more readable.
     I think now the "Okimo"is much more clear.
     I also make changes with colors so they can fit better with your website.
     I make the bulb image a smaller so "Okimo" looks bigger on smaller size.
     
     Let me know what do you think about this adjustments.
     
     Regards,
     Krisi

  2. BFI dit :

     Hello Krisi,
     
     Thanks for your improvements.
     
     We though about it today. I had a new idea that seems to satisfy everyone, could you stylised it ? I've modify your file (as I can ! I'm not really a webdesigner ;) ) and you can view the result here : http://seaflats.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/12/Logo krisi v2.jpg.
     
     As you see, here are what we finally need :
     
     1. Incline the light bulb
     
     2. Wrap the cable a little bit as if it were putted down the ground
     
     3. Put back the queue on the last "O" and add a little end that escape it
     
     Then can you add the vertical version stylised this way also ?
     
     For now, we only work on the white version, I will send you another file with our wish for the colored one.
     
     I think we are very near from what we want now.

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  1. krisi dit

     Hello,
     
     here my first adjustments.
     Let me know what do you think.
     
     Regards,
     Krisi

  2. BFI dit :

     Hello Krisi and thank your for your work !
     
     It looks good, but here are our new remarks to make it perfect :
     
     1. Some people didn't understand the first letter was a O, so they didn't read our name as Okimo but Kimo. I liked the way it turns but if it's not readable, it should be revised.
     
     2. I like the cable connecting the light bulb to the brand name. As the font should be revised to be more readable, could you for example make the cable thinner between the illustration and the name, and also between letters ? I don't know if it will render well, if you don't think so don't make it.
     
     3. Regarding the font, the first one was too classic, but even if I like the newest, it's perhaps a little bit too funky for a real estate business. Could you find something between these two proposition ?!
     
     4. When I tried to add this logo to our website, it looks good on the home page, but the name isn't readable when I put it on our menu and on the sticky header because the illustration is bigger and catch all the attention. What about putting it onto the first letter and also the cable ? Would it be better ? I want we still see this beautiful illustration, so I'm afraid it would appear too small ?
     
     5. Last remark (but all the ones are about the same thing after all), the main blue of the logo doesn't fit our graphic charter. We are more on a deeper one, like this : #1676B7. We also have a warm yellow, a touch of light blue-green and also of deep purple but just on the homepage. The yellow you've integrated first was nice because it's also on our website, but the key wasn't noticeable, it's better now. Perhaps it could be added only in some bubbles of the bulb ?
     
     This is a long reply but we are really interested by your proposition.
     
     Have a good week-end !

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  1. BFI dit :

     Bonsoir, (english version below this one)
     
     Nous avons rouvert le concours car nous avons eu un gros dossier à gérer la 1ère fois. Votre logo nous a particulièrement plu car il regroupe tous nos critères concernant l'illustration très ingénieuse ! (l'ampoule pour les idées, les bulles pour les projets et la clé pour l'immobilier). Mais nous aurions besoin de quelques modifications avant de faire notre choix définitif :
     
     1. Il faut proposer une version du logo horizontale, celle en verticale est nécessaire mais sera bien moins utilisée que l'horizontale. Il ne suffit pas de mettre l'illustration à gauche pour cela.
     
     2. Nous avons tous trouvé que le logo en couleurs ressortait moins bien que celui sur fond noir. Plusieurs personnes n'ont pas vu la clé dans la version couleur au premier regard. Donc : dans un premier temps, il faut changer les couleurs qui ne correspondent pas à notre charte graphique (voir fichiers joints sur la page du concours) et voir comment lui donner autant d'impact que la version en noir et blanc.
     
     3. Serait-il possible de styliser un peu plus la typographie ? Une idée m'est venue, mais vous êtes totalement libre de proposer autre chose : relier l'illustration au nom Okimo en faisant comme si c'était le câble de l'ampoule qui dessinait le nom du logo.
     
     Merci pour ces premiers ajustements. Nous vous tenons informé et avons beaucoup apprécié votre travail.
     
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     Good evening,
     
     We reopened the contest because we had a lot of work the first time.
     
     Your logo was particularly popular and appreciated because it includes all our criteria for the very ingenious illustration! (the bulb for ideas, the bubbles for projects and the key for real estate). But we would need some modifications before making our final choice:
     
     1. It is necessary to propose a version of the horizontal logo, the one in vertical is necessary but will be much less used than the horizontal one. It is not enough to put the illustration on the left for that.
     
     2. We all found that the logo in color was not as good as the logo on a black background. Many people did not see the key in the color version at first sight. So: first, you have to change the colors that do not correspond to our graphic charter (see attached files on the contest page) and see how to give it as much impact as the black and white version.
     
     3. Would it be possible to stylize a little more the typography? An idea came to me, but you are totally free to propose anything else: to connect the illustration to the name Okimo by pretending that it was the cable of the light bulb that drew the name of the logo.
     
     Thank you for these first adjustments. We keep you informed and really love your work.

  2. BFI dit :

     Bonsoir, (english version below this one)
     
     Nous avons rouvert le concours car nous avons eu un gros dossier à gérer la 1ère fois. Votre logo nous a particulièrement plu car il regroupe tous nos critères concernant l'illustration très ingénieuse ! (l'ampoule pour les idées, les bulles pour les projets et la clé pour l'immobilier). Mais nous aurions besoin de quelques modifications avant de faire notre choix définitif :
     
     1. Il faut proposer une version du logo horizontale, celle en verticale est nécessaire mais sera bien moins utilisée que l'horizontale. Il ne suffit pas de mettre l'illustration à gauche pour cela.
     
     2. Nous avons tous trouvé que le logo en couleurs ressortait moins bien que celui sur fond noir. Plusieurs personnes n'ont pas vu la clé dans la version couleur au premier regard. Donc : dans un premier temps, il faut changer les couleurs qui ne correspondent pas à notre charte graphique (voir fichiers joints sur la page du concours) et voir comment lui donner autant d'impact que la version en noir et blanc.
     
     3. Serait-il possible de styliser un peu plus la typographie ? Une idée m'est venue, mais vous êtes totalement libre de proposer autre chose : relier l'illustration au nom Okimo en faisant comme si c'était le câble de l'ampoule qui dessinait le nom du logo.
     
     Merci pour ces premiers ajustements. Nous vous tenons informé et avons beaucoup apprécié votre travail.
     
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     Good evening,
     
     We reopened the contest because we had a lot of work the first time.
     
     Your logo was particularly popular and appreciated because it includes all our criteria for the very ingenious illustration! (the bulb for ideas, the bubbles for projects and the key for real estate). But we would need some modifications before making our final choice:
     
     1. It is necessary to propose a version of the horizontal logo, the one in vertical is necessary but will be much less used than the horizontal one. It is not enough to put the illustration on the left for that.
     
     2. We all found that the logo in color was not as good as the logo on a black background. Many people did not see the key in the color version at first sight. So: first, you have to change the colors that do not correspond to our graphic charter (see attached files on the contest page) and see how to give it as much impact as the black and white version.
     
     3. Would it be possible to stylize a little more the typography? An idea came to me, but you are totally free to propose anything else: to connect the illustration to the name Okimo by pretending that it was the cable of the light bulb that drew the name of the logo.
     
     Thank you for these first adjustments. We keep you informed and really love your work.

  3. krisi dit

     Hello,
     
     Thank you for your feedback.
     I will work on adjustments and when I am ready I will upload new version.
     
     Regards,
     Krisi

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